Rough Cut & Feedback

- Take away the black and white effect as it does not fit with the indie pop genre.

- Change the setting for the performance side of the video, do not use the gym.

- There is no coherence or consistency used in your music video.

- Use more close ups.

- Ensure that the music drives the editing.

Teacher Feedback

- Take out the split screens, it makes the video look out of sync.

- More close ups of the band playing their instruments need to be used.

- The singer shows none of the emotion of passion that we can hear in the music.

- The narrative of the music video does not tell a story.